My Sentence
No one dared enter this garden.
Me Expanding
No sane human dared to ever travel from their dangerless house through the mistful nursery gates. He had never seen illuminating majestic rapunzel plants before.
Why I chose this sentence: I chose it because it looked short and it would be easy to expand on it because it was using easy words.
Why I expanded on a sentence: We have been reading fairy tales this term and then we wrote our versions of the stories. But for this story we just expanded on a sentence so that it wouldn’t take up much time so that everyone could get there work finished.
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