Quick write

Kahi's thoughts

The grin on his face made it look like he could throw up rainbows. He was so happy because he finally DESTROYED that essay and he could now move on and see if he got an A for his efforts. Now that he could use that on his resume so that he could get a job as a writer.

I was trying to expand on "I was happy" in this piece if writing.

Quick write

Kahi's thoughts

“Leave me alone, I'm about to watch the lights in the sky” bellowed Pauline the lights were the best thing Pauline has seen all year. The town mayor only turned the lights on every 10 years. She tried to draw them on her special piece construct paper but her little brother always gets in her way then the mayor turns the lights off but not this year she thought. She quietly said to her mum “can you please keep Billy away from me so I can draw the lights”

“Yes hun” her mum said.

I made this in 5 minutes

Quick write Describing the desert.

Kahis thoughts

It was scorching my skin, I felt like I was on fire and my skin was crumbling that's how hot it is. Nothing for Kilometres, Not even a cactus. Only big mountains of sand and the ground was cracked, some cracks were almost the size of my head. I turned around and then I saw a pond of water.

My learning outcome was to describe the desert setting it up for my story. we only had 5 minutes too.

Quick write my character

Kahi's thoughts

Once he had eaten his dinner he could go back and write in his book that he earned by being good and getting prison points. He could barely fit through his cell door because he was too tall he was 6.6ft, He also got bullied in prison because he likes weird music and he also got bullied because he is the only inmate with blonde hair.

I had 5 minutes to write this, sorry if its not up to scratch.

Monday 6th august Quick write

Appearance:
6.6 ft
103 kg
White/Blonde Hair
Tan skin
Buff
Tattoos
Personality:
He loves to write because all he had in prison was a pen and piece of paper so he started writing and found out he loves writing.
He loves weird music like running his hand across the bars of his prison cell.
How does the character change over time?
He went into prison hating writing, But the warden gave him a pen and paper. so he found out he loves writing.

I only had ten minutes to create this piece of writing, Sorry if this isn't up to scratch. Thanks

TDIH with Jakob

Article 1

Atomic bomb dropped on Hiroshima by the US B-29 Superfortress "Enola Gay" Facts

• What was the name of the US Army Air Force B 29 that dropped the atomic bomb on Nagasaki?

Bockscar, sometimes called Bock's Car, is the name of the United States Army Air Forces B-29 bomber that dropped a Fat Man nuclear weapon over the Japanese city of Nagasaki during World War II in the second – and last – nuclear attack in history.

• What happened to the pilot who dropped the atomic bomb?

Paul Warfield Tibbets Jr. (23 February 1915 – 1 November 2007) was a brigadier general in the United States Air Force. He is best known as the pilot who flew the Enola Gay (named after his mother) when it dropped Little Boy, the first of two atomic bombs used in warfare, on the Japanese city of Hiroshima.

Article 2

US drops 2nd atomic bomb "Fat Man" on Japan destroys part of Nagasaki. Facts

• How many civilians were killed in Hiroshima and Nagasaki?

Over the next two to four months, the acute effects of the atomic bombings killed 90,000–146,000 people in Hiroshima and 39,000–80,000 people in Nagasaki; roughly half of the deaths in each city occurred on the first day.

• USSR, most powerful nuclear weapon ever detonated, yield of 50 megatons, (50 million tons of tnt).

How heavy was fat man?

Fat Man
Weight	10,300 pounds (4,670 kg)
Length	128 inches (3.3 m)
Diameter	60 inches (1.5 m)
Filling	Plutonium Plutonium is a dense silvery radioactive metal of the actinide series, used as a fuel in nuclear reactors and as an explosive in nuclear fission weapons. Plutonium only occurs in trace amounts in nature but is manufactured in nuclear reactors from uranium-238.

Todays Magnificent quick write about Ronaldo

Cristiano Ronaldo

The college soccer Slayer. He desperately wants to join Real Madrid, He wants it so much that he would kill to get in. He joins the College soccer team and won every game in his league, One day he was sitting at home and he got a phone call. It was from (Sporting CP)’s manager he wanted Ronaldo but he turned him down.

Three little pigs story line

Exposition:

I was trying to create my version of the three little pigs. and It might be a bit gruesome for viewers.

Daily quick write about a time with a cousin or friend

Once my cousin came to my house for Easter and we had a great time because we did a massive Easter egg hunt with chocolate bunnies, i'm not just talking about any small hand size choc bunnies either it was the size of my arm and my arm is pretty big. It took us 1 hour to find all the eggs. After we found all the eggs we counted them and there was 100 each and that is tonnes. You have to have strength leonine to be able to do that for an hour, but we were kids Full of energy and all that.

This was just a quick write and we had 5 minutes to write it, so sorry if the quality is bad my objective was to create a narrative story.

Quick Write with Jakob

It was the middle of the night. A gunshot whizzed past my ear.
I ducked and returned fire, I yelled “enemies 12 o’clock”.
Everyone sprang up and started firing at the enemy trench.
I pulled out my radio and called in the airstrike.
The spitfire flew low and bombed the enemies.
All the shots stopped and everyone started cheering.
Then out of the smoke about 500 soldier’s charged at us with their
bayonets.
We stopped cheering and started shooting.
They were climbing into our trench and slashing our men.
I started shooting then ran away down the hill behind me.
I felt a sharp pain and looked down only to see a blood stained chest.
I woke up.

Home Links week 6

We tried and tried but the battery was dead NOOOO!!!!!!!! I said When the phone wasn’t turning on the phone had no use to us now.

“so we were stuck in this cave forever” my friend said

“I'm not sure” I said with some fright in my voice

“Why us?”

“I DON’T KNOW”

“Theres gotta be a way out of this place”

“There has to be, Right? Ok what do you have in your backpack i have a lighter and lunch that my mum gave me”

“I have chocolate and a pistol”

“WHY DO YOU HAVE A PISTOL” I asked

“Because this is a sketchy town, You know”

“Yeah but that's a little extreme”

“What can we use our items for ?”

“Um i think that w…”

But i didn’t get to finish my sentence because we heard a deep voice say “hey kids hehehe”

Johnny grabbed the pistol and shot randomly we didn’t hear anything then i heard Johnny scream.

DUN DUN DUN

To be continued.

Quick Write

It was 1987 on a Tuesday and it was time to go for my weekly swim in the sea but i felt a bad feeling in my gut, i just thought i was hungry so i got some food and it was still there so i just went for my swim.i got there it was 4pm no one was there i dipped my foot into the water and it was nippy. 20 minutes passed and i was just about to get out when Something brushed against me under the water and i knew i wasn’t alone. So i tried to swim out but it grabbed onto my leg and dragged me down under the water i struggled but i eventually broke free and i swam so fast that there was making waves and big ones but it wasn't me. It jumped up over me and the wave crushed me. I thought i died but i was on a boat that said rescue on the side and at that moment i knew i was alive.