Wednesday, August 15, 2018

Quick write


Kahi's thoughts


The grin on his face made it look like he could throw up rainbows. He was so happy because he finally DESTROYED that essay and he could now move on and see if he got an A for his efforts. Now that he could use that on his resume so that he could get a job as a writer.
I was trying to expand on "I was happy" in this piece if writing.

2 comments:

  1. hi Kahi i liked the project you did. Tyler

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  2. Ka Pai Kahi!
    My name is Tess, and I really enjoyed reading your paragraph expanding on the weak sentence 'I was happy'. How long did it take you to write it?
    Keep up the good Work,
    Tess.

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